Well if you played Twilight Princess all the way to the end you will figure out that the mirror is destroyed by Minda. So that is what I don't get. How can Minda return when she destroyed the only way to get back to Hyrule? Also saying it wasent a normal color is to vague. The reader will want to know "How it was off color?" Was it a little green? Was it completely yellow? Was it darker? You tell me. I dont know what color it is because the info is not given. I have played TP before, but if some random person came along and found the book (and they haven't played TP)and read that particular section they would not know what the twilight was. They would only know that it was some force field that Link and Rustl got sucked into (or at least taken into).
Also what do you mean by it being a twilight princess story? Is is following the plot of the game or is it going to have a different outcome than TP?

Besides all the things I mentioned. I think this book is going to turn out great. Hope to get to read some more soon. Trust me this book looks like it has a lot of potential. So keep it coming.

P.S. Again no offense intended. I just feel that the story has a few weeds in there.

isn't this just fan fiction

I think so.

hey hellsing is back! *cancels funeral arraignments*

your guys are right about the fan fiction. I hope i did not cause too much trouble.

u didn't u helped me.

OMG alucards been gone forever!

Really, because i thought I was just being annoying and I needed to stop before I was banned on WLTP for life?

And who is alcards I haven't really seen him on the forums yet.

Trust me there are people who I haven't seen on the forums since the early days of WLTP (or when the podcast was in its teens, episode wise).

Here are a few members I havent seen in a long while.
Luigi
Dodo_JS
Ruben

i remember dodo and rockstar man

http://www.wiiliketopodcast.com/about/alucard_hellsing

thats alcuard profile phantom

i think that you should randomly add mario

have navi make a guest appearence

How far are u in it now Neder?

i haven't written anything on it in a while because i recently just got back into world of warcraft and that has been where most of my time is devoted but once school gets back in session i will write a lot more on it

world of warcraft may be addicting (and possibly an equevlent to nicotine) but it is probably the most fun game ever

world of warcraft has taken another victim -_- :neder

RIP Neder

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hn-enjcgV1o

replace "baby" with "neder"

lol I'v seen some videos of parents deleting their kid's WoW file. They end up like this guy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBVmfIUR1DA

neder may the force be with you

that is so stupid. i would never end up like that because i have other video games

don't worry i'll still be on when blizzard is doing maintance (thats why i'm on wltp right now) and when the servers are down

I didn't mean you would end up like that. It's just I'm saying some people are truly addicted to that game. They some halo to clear their mind.

be nice to neder, he might have us killed in the book

That was a wierd/funny as hell video.

Yeah but its all acting read the description.

yeah. this was actually a actor trying to show people of how they think of gamers. So much people misunderstood it that it was a shame.

okay back on topic to the fan fiction

i tried to write a fan fic once (for elfen lied) i think i got 5 lines done at the most

I haven't even tried to make a fan fic yet.

Yeah I suck at anything that has to do with language arts.

I can't imagine writing a book I would get so frustrated I would start doing this

I would do that if I got writers block on something. Not Literally.

this is how all those episodes are..lucy is naked and she blows up peole's heads..end of episode

sounds like it would be a great book

no it goes she get naked people shoot at her THEN she blows there heads off